Ahmed brought an essay to our sixth meeting. We spent the
session checking for errors in his writing, and clearing up some of his word
order errors. Ahmed's essay was on
technology, and how he thinks technology is having a negative effect of
people's social lives. He argues that people ought to talk more, especially to
friends and family. His essay followed the five-paragraph form very well, and
we fixed up a lot of his errors. His essay was also good because it had a
strong tone and voice. This is an important part in writing for graduate school,
so it is important for Ahmed to cultivate this skill. In addition, Ahmed's
accuracy has gotten better, and he makes very few grammatical errors now.
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