Ebo Entsuah TS #4

For this Tutoring Session me and Ahmed went over narrative writing and how to create a story from various pictures. I gave him a series of pictures and he picked the ones that felt most interesting to him. After, I told him to write down some words that described those pictures and how they made him feel.The picture that he himself picked was that of two men running. He wrote a paragraph about how they were training for a marathon and had been planning on running one for a very long time. After he wrote it, I looked at it and was able to edit and correct the mistakes that were in the paragraph. Making sure to nitpick but at the same time grasp the core concept of the story.